Monday 9 November 2020

Inter school Motu X country.



i had fun running into the finish line.
I found hard going over the fences on the hill
i didnt enjoy going up the hill

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3 comments:

  1. Unknown23 November 2020 at 11:29

    Hi Avril,
    I really like your slide your slide you did about Motu Cross Country.
    The facts were really interesting.
    Maybe next time you can add another photo and type a couple more facts.
    Tino pai Avril.
    From your friend Bella.:)

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    1. Anonymous23 November 2020 at 11:35

      Hi Bella! Its Avril here I just wanted to say. TY!!

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  2. Anonymous23 November 2020 at 11:40

    Hi Avril,
    I like your slide
    try adding a another photo

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